Audience Feedback

After presenting our planning to the group, they gave us some opinions and ways to improve our story to make it more interesting:

• Harlequin - Good original name, easy to remember
• Unsolved mystery - someone has died before hand
• Should use newspaper to show this
• Clown should use a real kitchen knife as his weapon
• Sounds in trailer should include: heavy breathing, bangs and creaking
• Voiceover should be a deep mail sophisticated voice

We have decided to use all these ideas including creating a newspaper to show the story behind the house.